Looks to me like the fastest route to your opponent is actually using their backdoor, and I don't think that's what you were going for. This is going to be hard for P in PvZ and hard for T in PvT, just because their early game generally requires them to be able to guard their choke.

randomize the mins plz. the cliff could be annyoing for p and its lil bit too plain imho.

Starparty needs to Pimp this.

Someone have any suggestions about the things which need to be fixed? I could move the minerals in the main backward away from the cliff, or i can separate the cliff and make expos there. I want to see your opinions please

map updated:
clif separated
added expos
more decoration

please randomize the minerals.

its better without the cliff behind mains unconnected. it still seems oddly unnatural looking.

wtf is with yellow having a starting position?????

oops sry, i forget to delete that location ;)

Distances are kinda far, and many expos along the way, I think its too easy for a player to secure a few too many just by holding thier side.