i have remake a lot "Union Round"

Then delete, Union Round from the map DB. You can do this!

And you have 18 expands here, without the mains! You have the same problem as i had in Darinas Feelings. But your expands are even more from Darina, in her first stages. Now i reduse them.

Now i won't be lazy like my last times, i will say the only one thing that i didn't like in Union Round and this. Your bottom main ramps, are very close to the map edge, the space right before the ramp is very small, and the bottom positions are the only possitions where terran can wall on before the ramps on the cliff choke. I am not very shor, but from the pick it seems that terran can wall with only 1 rax to this bottom choke.

You have to think of a way to make this "choke" more open, and add more space before the ramp.

And look at GMCS.

ok lgi

14 without mains. 18 "bases" with mains.

and so???, in r-point there are 18 bases, so i not see the problem

I hate R-point.

All those doodads on the solar array restrict units, and there are a whole lot of those, remove some.
=D

Whats up with the mineral placement in the mid expo?

I like the map alot but it needs some work.

in the middle the mineralplacement must be vertical, cuz thee isn't space, however ok i can remove some doodads

other suggestion?

what other color can a shadow be? lol