not finished - but mostly deco is what needs to be done, including the ruin doodads.

I reccomended to Nasty to make the middle expos mineral only, and to add a 3rd middle ramp on the E/W expos.

T can tank the nat from the choke and maybe even from the plateau.......

It's a good map, but I don't know about the two geyser thing. Also, the gas geysers in the main bases look kinda weird and not symmetrical when they're all on the left side like that. If I were you I'd make them on opposite sides.

Other than that the map looks really good, nice job

besttarsier, check out the gas issue @article section...
i would use only 1 gas on 3h/9h, also the ramp to the middle sounds good.

add 1-2 mineral field at nat, otherwise its 2 zergfriendly

make 2-gasexpo more open, now its an easy-3+4 gas for turtlezerg-till-ultraling zvp which is very hard to handle on a lowmineralmap like this