Hi I am new member in this site, u guys can try out the map but I don't know how to add the picture

modified by Ag-Toss

Gas issue, top choke is looser than bottom choke. Not much else to say other than you really need some decoration, looks too plain. I don't like the mineral formations.

thx, I will change it

reds entry into the main is longer, while blues one is more narrow oO

also you should add more minerals in main and make the chockes bigger. Using inverted ramps would be better, too.

Thanks for uploading your map. You should read the article "Guide to Map-Making" written by panschk[FP] in the article section to the right of your screen.

You have too few minerals in your mains and a gas issue (read also the article on the gas issue). Your nearest expo to the main is too far away and this hurts zerg. The distribution of land is unequal, the space in front of the your land formations look squareish and unnatural and the map looks barren. The space across from the central divide is unequal in size when you compare North vs. South. To make more symmetrical maps use the scmdraft2 mirror tool, google it to obtain it. Ash probably is the most difficult tileset in terms of producing "nice" maps, try using another one like badlands or jungle until you improve.

Don't get discouraged, read a little and watch the maps people upload here and the comments they get.

when using a nature terrain for example jungle or ash u must make it look realistic, not so squere and so on. meanwhile if u do a space map it can be quere since its built by human :)

This looks far better then many of the maps made by new mappers. As Lamcet said, check out the guide here and work on your skills and refer to the guide if your unsure of anything. Ask an experienced mapper if you have any specific questions.

I think this 96*128 is a hard map to make cuz I do mostly square maps

Can u guys show me what u guys can do to my map and where to get the programs

stormcoast-fortress.net to download scmdraft (or xtra ediotr) :)

Bland.

if u want to show me what u can do to this map go ahead and there is no password for my map (free edit!!)

Welcome To BWMN :)

LOL. First you say he is a stupid and then you say WELCOME TO BWMN. :)

And he was there before u. -_-

where i said that he is stupid ? he was where before me ? i don't get what you mean xD lol

LOL

omfg when i got scm draft 2 and the first thing i done where big ramps and big bridges... are you so stupid that you can't make them your self ?

He was on this site before u.

he wasn't here before me |(
that thing with the bridges i don't saw that he posted it ^^

Yes he was. This is oooold.

"Hi I am new member in this site" why the fuck then he would post this!?!

OMG. HE CAME BACK HERE.
HE WAS HERE BEFORE TOO.
HE IS MAKING COMEBACK.
DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M SAYING?

don't he have to say something like "He Guys i'm back" or "i haven't been here for a while but here i am" ???

Damn ur stupid. LOOK ASH RAMPS COMMENTS.

Long Time no see every1! I still don't know how to make fat ramps, inverted ramps and fat bridges can some1 post a topic about this?

big lvoe between siaboo and lastcurse heh? :>

yeah, lvoe.

lol LasTCursE, this is map id 2805 and Ag-Toss writed the "Hi I am new member in this site, u guys can try out the map but I don't know how to add the picture" comment long time ago.

do you understand? or are you so stupid that you can't understand it yourself?

stop it with the personnal shits seriously, what happend to this site?
is nightmarej00 the only one who can comment on the actual maps? Xd

nah seriously, just stop those shits plz

I am always first who comment a new map. ;) Mostly.

mabye i should start with faschist moderating

edit: I mispost
modified by Ag-Toss