A map i kinda got a feel for from blue storm. definitaly not compleite tell me what you guys think and thank you.

I don't see how this has kinda got a feel for blue storm

This has nothing to do with blue storm at all, except that they both have sls, minerals, gas, etc.

Middle is too tight, and the sides look like they wont be used much.

You have alot of wasted space imo.

Actually the middle has a lot of space to move around plenty for flanks and setting up attacks.

Not really. The tight secondary paths make sure of that. They're even mineral blocked.