My first attempt at making a map! Please rate, and feel free to give advice, thanks.

first i think that the map size could be 96 128 and still be good. the expoes are all way to easy to defend imo for terran. Does the double gas expo have 5000 each geyser? pathing is pretty tight and i dont see a point really in having those long ramps in the middle and have narrow paths leading out. maybe fill in the doodad areas with high dirt. my thoughts.:)

For your first map it's pretty good..

at the first min only expansion
the entrance shoüuld be wider..
in general pathing is tight.

also, your ramp are (in generell) not bad,
but opening the map i noticed some "ugly parts"
you could improve, especially the connection between ramps and cliffs.


you could add some ramps, but i cant explain the locations..

if i knew how to use GMCS i would show you :)

or i could upload a pic.. wait ill try.

Okay, here it is.
My suggestions for the map.
I fixed the "ugly parts" a little bit..
could be that i oversaw some.

http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/5664/thnewfrontier2.jpg

yea.. but gj on concept, really :)

ps: watch my evil paint skillz :P
modified by Gnom

i also dont think that the min wall is really necessary. i doubt itll be mined out at all. and the min only min positions could be changed so it is against the edge of the map then itll make the expo more comfortable. its just from looking but u think that the min only is awkward.

I would really add the ramps i suggested in the pic in my post above.

swagu is right, also..

man this could be such a nice map!

update it somehow! :)

Hi I'm new cool map :)