A fun 1v1 that takes place after the ravages of war have struck down a once valient space platform...

with the next update, please remove the space in front of the "R" in the mapname.
To the map itself: It looks nice imo, but some changes should be done:
- Mainbase size should be bigger, don't use unbuildable doodads in mainbase (always try to find buildable ones though, makes the map look better)
- natural's choke is too narrow, terran could wallin pretty easily. move the natural closer to the ramp and then make the choke wider.
Try if zerg can secure his expansion and main with a set of sunkens without havin to build a 3. hatch.

- The island expansions should have gas imo
- Maybe try to find a way to improve the size of battle zone in the middle part of the map, more unbuilable terrain too.

This map really looks like a real space platform. It would be great if you can add a planet or a sun, in one of the map edges :P . Well this center is not for my taste, i hate duble expands, i would re-make the center of the map. If you want the air expands to be a better part of the map, you better put gas there for sure. Oh... panschk, already say what i am going to say, i am just gonna add, that i thing this map needs some more doodads. And use SCMDraft to make a picture, it is much better.

there is no flanking room, and so much unused space

The entire map wasn't planned to be used whatsoever. Thats the way its supposed to be, and for sure that isn't going to be changed.

Thanks people. I'll work on what you said ^^

*bad map name detected*

yea, rename it.

meaning, remove the space after (2)

yah, was doing this as I started my discussion with LGI about chaos factor^^

uploading the corrected mapfile in a sec