bad

why?

Because it focuses a bit too much on impossible straight line symetry. Everyone I'm sure is aware that staredit is incapable of producing a perfectly straight line directly North East West or South. When I look at the map, that's what stands out, the jagged attempt at a straight line that looks ugly when used too much.

Gameplay...

This map's pathing is about the width of my fingernail. It would be impossible to micro an army through those tiny tiny sectors. Therefore, T has a HUGE advantage because it can park 3 tanks at any expansion (excluding the islands) and snipe every unit that travels down those tiny pathways. The open space in the middle is hugely wasted due to the fact that it branches off into such smath paths. At the moment, the only way I see that beiong fixed, is if you position the islands in a way that allows free movement around it.

Damn it, that was supposed to work >.< just use the link I suppose

Why do you spam things like that? Do you enjoy being censored?

why my fist comment was deleted?

heh. They just censor for fun now...

JK)Valkyrion: "Why?"

AHHHHH THAT'S ILLEGAL NOOOOOOO DELETE DELETE DELETE!!!!

Unplayable.

well, the 1st comment being a "why" after mosq's was censored doesn't make much sense, does it?

I was thinking about that halfway through my post, but I just wanted to write nonsense in caps, sry ;)

ok

i think you need to censore yourself, flothefreak ^^

unplayable as it is, but a few changes could make this work still. gmcs

ok tnx max just I have time I systemize those mistakes

I remaked almost entirely the map say you how is now

i have olso make a minerals witch block the main base(minerals capacity are=24)

Wow much much much better. But those min blocks are verrrrrrry bad. get rid of them asap.

and thing I put to their place a neutral construction?, no because I wanted to do a supplementary species of passage for the main base things to agree some strategy in more

you heard of pathing?

you gotta delete those minblockades
modified by flothefreak

and I replace them with a normal ground

ok see now

wow its a completely different map. i like everything except the islands how they are stuffed in the corner and so far away from any action

hmmm for island you say that I should put a flight in the islands even if the small flights?

nah dont getrid of the islands theres nothig else you can put there.
maybe make the middle a little bit tighter, as now its just a big open space where toss and terran will get owned

I added some decorations, for the center, i think is ok

I think the islands are a bit overpowered right now. If you made it so the naturals couldn't be hit from the islands, I would be happy. Check GMCS.

great improvement, just make everyone's resources like teals and red's

ok i have fixed

"sorry you don't know how to play SC, it's unplayable map" <- it's my imho, STOP DELETING COMMENTS lol

don't feed him, valk, this is what he wants.

ok indifferent is the best way

however i have fix the bugs,see now plz

Teal's natural choke seems really tight.

Other than that i really like this map :)
modified by decafchicken

no the main base of teal player is not tight

The choke outside the natural seems tighter.

it seems you badly, because it is just things how is

no decaf is right.... the gas makes the path smaller. move the gas.

quale gas?

what gas?

other comment?

Stop doing that... "Other Comment?" You make it seem like you want to be the center of attention. If no one is commenting on your map, then it probably fits into one or more of these catagories:
1) All problems adressed have been fixed
2) The map is not interesting enough to spark attention
3) The map has recieved an overdose of attention already
4) There are so many problems that need to be fixed, therefore no one bothers pointing them out.

There is also the possibility that your head is in your ass and you just want attention.

I have alone fix the map I did not write not any comment what you say is a comment that already had written 3 days does -.-

It doesn't matter if that's an old comment, you always say that on all of your maps.
modified by Arden(WoF)

But that devil you say. ...

...what?