Another Try from me...plz HELPFUL comments, thx
(wanna make a good map xD)
now i worked much more than 1 hour^^
modified by Sworn.

some parts seem a little tight. I especially have concens about horizontal tvp because you can't really break out of the nat horizontally.

added many GMC's

i try to fix it

edited
modified by Sworn.

tell me more

Nat restricts troop movement.

Main exit is too small, no one's going to build factories and barracks outside to counter that, cause it's not defensible outside.

main exit is wider than a ramp

Morrow, u are the only one who helps me, gogo^^

i dont really have anything more to say, why dont u help me now with System ;)

Who wants to play 1n1 on this map against me?^^

How much is that mineral block?

40

i changed your pic because it was pretty much fucked up

I edited map, but why is this picture black/white?
Now i have Photofiltre, can som1 explain the settings plz..

i bet it was crackling ^^

now it has colour xD.

gogo say sth!
modified by Sworn.

its blue

With that minwall, the minblock at the 4o'clock expansion (and the others of that type) becomes really just an annoyance. I'd remove it.

i tested it, and i kick that fucking minwall, he only cases mannny problems

Not the minwall. The minblock at the expnasion.

i agree with spines

fixed once again