Nice man this is actually not bad at all. :}
Distances main 2 main, and nat 2 nat are really good, and the bridges look pretty cool.

I have also realized that you love mineral blocks, and neutral blocks but there is + than only 1 neutral building out there you should mix it up lol, dont always go 4 the same 1 even if its ur favorite.

I do however see some problems in map, Il mention a few:

-Those ramps, lol good try but they dont even blend, they look pretty bad close up. Id recommend you to put normal ones, but if you want 2 be a bit different just put the Korean ones.

-There Is no start location in player 3#

-Also in the base of said player, in the ramp, the neutral building and min block are facing the wrong way, these is makes this base impossible to fast expand.

-Also in the base of that same player the ramp and bridge are positioned horribly, its by far the most harassable.

Fix map UP!! It has potential.

man i fix a few problems but i wanna tell me other things for my other maps

i really like it!
*download click

just use normal ramps

finaly i fix the ramps :D