Not bad, I like this one!

OK here I'm just checking, you do realize that even if the mains give the illusion of being on high ground they are not? What really happens here is a low ground base that really is like a normal jungle main base that is surrounded by temple Example: (3)Longinus, only difference is that in the choke where your "ramp" is you are going to have a ridge, not a ramp Example: you are going to have a small ridge version, like in the map (2)Heartbreakridge.

Capish so far ?

Confusing mains, just make them either lowground or highground.

It seems that the map would be split too easily, with each player securing the 4 bases pretty easily(nat[obviously], 3rd gas, minonly)

the mains i saw them somewhere on a ash map.

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The nat's kinda yucky.